nikki
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Post by nikki on Dec 30, 2008 2:51:51 GMT -5
Picture: naruhinafreak.deviantart.com/art/Daisuke-76207586 (just minus the ears <.< >.>) Alias: Dai or Moronic idiot (as his twin affectionately calls him) Name: Daisuke Shiga Age: 21 Gender: male Weight: 162 Height: 5'09" Hair: silver Eyes: icy blue Year?: Graduated Job: Teacher
Personality: Always full of jokes and sarcasm, Daisuke is always getting the other end of his twin sister Aleena's wrath. A flirt and a ladies man, he loves to show off to any girl he meets. He has a profound loyalty to his sudents and family and never leaves a friend hanging.
Physical Description: Stunning silver hair he inherited from his father cropped short, icy blue eyes he inherited from his mother, and a rather boyish face make him one of the most sought after in the school by teachers and students alike. With a height of 5’09” he also towers over most of the student and the teacher body. He has tanned skin and a few freckles under his eyes that never disappeared as he grew older which causes the female body (and some males) to swoon when he walks through the hallway or down the street. He is normally seen in jeans and a muscle shirt with a jacket pulled over it whether he’s at work or not, and always has a teenage look about him.
History: Born to Xemnas and Kiara Shiga, Daisuke was one of two children and is also the oldest of the two twins. His younger sister, by two minutes, Aleena, and he grew up to be as close as siblings could be. One was never seen without the other. It did not change when their parents gave birth to triplets when they were six years old and stayed the same when they reached the age of twelve.
When it became apparent that Aleena was smarter in math and other subjects, Daisuke went into languages. In putting all his thoughts into his studies and his newest interest in girls he grew slightly distant from his sibling, which did not go unnoticed by Aleena and the rest of the family. While their 6 year old siblings could not understand why their older sister was “always sad”, their parents did and immediately sat their oldest son down to explain that it was no use being good in a subject if you had no one close to share the knowledge and love of learning with. Daisuke, realizing the mistake and the affect he was having on his twin, immediately reverted back to his original self and hung out with his siblings more while still keeping up his studies and his newest hobby of “babe watching” as he called it. Life went smoothly from then on until the night of the twin’s 18th birthday when, on the way back from a birthday dinner, their parents were killed in a car accident. Daisuke and his siblings were in a different car, the triplets wanting to “ride with the old guys”, and saw the whole thing from a short distance behind. Upon arriving at the scene a few seconds later, Daisuke immediate moved to take their parents from the car before he realized his father’s side had been crushed beyond recognition and his mother lay limp within the passenger’s seat. It was the darkest day the family had ever seen.
After the funeral, Aleena and Daisuke took on the roles of the legal guardians, taking care of their siblings as they went to college, Aleena studying to become a teacher as she had always wanted to, and Daisuke doing the same simply because his mother had said he’d make a damn good one. Both now teach at their younger siblings’ school, Aleena as an algebra teacher and Daisuke as a Spanish teacher who occasionally filled in for the German and French teachers.
Other:Interests are flirting, his family, flirting, his friends, and flirting. Video games are also included
Secret Words: Edited Out
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Fantasy
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"She Grabbed The Gun. She's Had Enough."
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Post by Fantasy on Jan 5, 2009 8:09:18 GMT -5
I told you everything once. I'll list it all again. - Put what job he has as a teacher, not just teacher.
- Personality needs to be at least five sentences long.
- Remember we don't want male Mary Sues, few adults swoon even females. Make his description a tad believable, we can understand a sought after high school life is believable--but I can't image a swooning teacher.
- Aleena can't be written as an Algebra teacher, we already have two. Daisuke can not substitute for any other languages. He is an official language teacher, not a stand in. Remove those aspects from the history.
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